Friday, 12 June 2020

The fantastic hungry wave

Hello my viewers This week we have been learning about The hungry wave the story is a tsunami that hit Tonga and Samoa.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 June 2020 at 14:31

    hello paul It is lefine I saw your work and I thought it was amazing but I have advice can you please put a background colour that allows you to see the writing without changing the colours.
    Kind Regards: lefine

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  2. Anonymous24 July 2020 at 11:41

    KIA Ora, Paul

    Hello Paul I really liked how you are telling us about Ana's feeling. The thing that You could improve on is to make sure your writing makes sense.
    Kind Regards: Leipua

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