Friday, 29 November 2019
The unknown mask By Paul Bloomfield
we have been writing a recount about charlie a person hiding behind a wall we had to describe it. The part i liked about it was when charlie was peeking out if any was coming
The unknown mask
By Paul Bloomfield
So he was shocked that there was someone following him.So he started to run for his life aaa please leave me alone. No I will not leave you alone I will take off my mask so the person did and he was a baby so he started to Laugh hahahaha omg why am i so scared. then the baby said to Charlie i will catch you cant run or you can't hide. O i guess you can run but you can’t hide for long hahahahahaha o now i need to catch you now. So he started crawling but charlie was near the corner of the block so baby jack jack turn at the block and charlie was climbing the ladder. there was baby jack jack. Baby Jack Jack looked up and charlie said hahaha shame on you what did you say bro i am spiderman you can't out run me then charlie said i am trapped then baby jack jack said you can jump off the roof then he called the police and he went to jail and baby jack jack. Man i am the beast in the world i should be rich but i am not rich i live at my aunty house ant may
Friday, 25 October 2019
My writing is a recount is about one part of my holidays. It was about going to camp in Hamilton for a family reunion.
Going to fantastic Hamilton
On friday when school finishes I saw people walking home when I got home I went to my room and packed some clothes and socks and underpants. Then, i went for a shower when I got out of the shower I got ready.
when my mum was making food my mum was doing toast for me my sister and herself. When my mum was finished cooking, she said to me “have” you got your stuff ready?” I said yes ok she said. Then I got into the car and put on my seatbelt and my mum took me to my dad’s house. Then my dad got ready to go to Hamilton. It took us 2 hours then we stopped at an ice cream shop. Then we got out of the car and we ordered double chocolate and a double cookie and cream flavour. Then we bought other another two more ice cream. We bought double lemon and lime with boysenberry. Then we were on our way to Hamilton. When we were nearly there I was super excited! Then I was screaming like i was already there. We were there!!!
We went to our room and we grabbed our stuff and put it in our room’s.
When i went to the gameroom In the game room we had a ping pong table. We had a pool table and stick hockey table. Then my cousin and I were playing ping-pong. My other cousin uncle and aunty. Aunty were watching us play when they were there my cousin said “let’s do points we said “ok” So we did valley. We got into a real game!! The points were up to 3. Then i got one point then i got another point with a spike. It was game point for me! When my cousin served the ping pong ball to me i fully spike him I won!! Then i went upstairs to sleep in my room with my sisters.
I felt so excited about coming to Hamilton and winning against my cousin that I had an awesome time with him and my other cousin.
when my mum was making food my mum was doing toast for me my sister and herself. When my mum was finished cooking, she said to me “have” you got your stuff ready?” I said yes ok she said. Then I got into the car and put on my seatbelt and my mum took me to my dad’s house. Then my dad got ready to go to Hamilton. It took us 2 hours then we stopped at an ice cream shop. Then we got out of the car and we ordered double chocolate and a double cookie and cream flavour. Then we bought other another two more ice cream. We bought double lemon and lime with boysenberry. Then we were on our way to Hamilton. When we were nearly there I was super excited! Then I was screaming like i was already there. We were there!!!
We went to our room and we grabbed our stuff and put it in our room’s.
When i went to the gameroom In the game room we had a ping pong table. We had a pool table and stick hockey table. Then my cousin and I were playing ping-pong. My other cousin uncle and aunty. Aunty were watching us play when they were there my cousin said “let’s do points we said “ok” So we did valley. We got into a real game!! The points were up to 3. Then i got one point then i got another point with a spike. It was game point for me! When my cousin served the ping pong ball to me i fully spike him I won!! Then i went upstairs to sleep in my room with my sisters.
I felt so excited about coming to Hamilton and winning against my cousin that I had an awesome time with him and my other cousin.
Thursday, 13 December 2018
Maui and the big fish
Maui and the big fish
We have been learning about the summer learning journey and we are writing about it then we saw the Maui and the big fish on the summer learning journey website.
Maui dream of going fishing so when he asked his brother if he can go fishing they laugh at Maui they said you are to little to come fishing and you are the youngest in the family. So on that night Maui went out of the Village and got on the canoe and went of in to the dark sea. In the morning Maui said a Prayer when he finish
He started to get lots of fish. Then when the brothers woke up they saw canoe not close to the shore so the brothers came down when the brothers came down Maui jumped out of the canoe then the brothers saw all of the fish that he catched himself. Then the brothers were jealous so they went back into the sea then Maui did a Prayer he told his brothers to put their hooks down in the water then he began to say the Prayer then they start to catch lots of fish then Maui pulled the big fish under the sea and it became the north land.
We have been learning about the summer learning journey and we are writing about it then we saw the Maui and the big fish on the summer learning journey website.
Maui dream of going fishing so when he asked his brother if he can go fishing they laugh at Maui they said you are to little to come fishing and you are the youngest in the family. So on that night Maui went out of the Village and got on the canoe and went of in to the dark sea. In the morning Maui said a Prayer when he finish
He started to get lots of fish. Then when the brothers woke up they saw canoe not close to the shore so the brothers came down when the brothers came down Maui jumped out of the canoe then the brothers saw all of the fish that he catched himself. Then the brothers were jealous so they went back into the sea then Maui did a Prayer he told his brothers to put their hooks down in the water then he began to say the Prayer then they start to catch lots of fish then Maui pulled the big fish under the sea and it became the north land.
Reindeer word search
Reindeer word search.
Yesterday me and my friends were doing a word search about all of the reindeer’s names.
Yesterday me and my friends were doing a word search about all of the reindeer’s names.
The First thing that you have to do is look at the letter then you have to for cupid so let's look for the letter c if you see the letter c look if it is going up look up if it is going right then look right.
If there is a another word like dasher the look for dasher if it is going down then look down if it is going left then look left.
If you are looking for the letter dancer then you look for the letter if it’s going Diagonal then look diagonal to find it.
If you are looking for the letter comet then you have to Diagonal for the letter or somewhere else.
If you are looking for the letter Blitzen then look diagonal down to look for it.
If you are looking for the word donner look if it is going diagonal up or diagonal down.
Yesterday me and my friends were doing a word search about all of the reindeer’s names.
Yesterday me and my friends were doing a word search about all of the reindeer’s names.
The First thing that you have to do is look at the letter then you have to for cupid so let's look for the letter c if you see the letter c look if it is going up look up if it is going right then look right.
If there is a another word like dasher the look for dasher if it is going down then look down if it is going left then look left.
If you are looking for the letter dancer then you look for the letter if it’s going Diagonal then look diagonal to find it.
If you are looking for the letter comet then you have to Diagonal for the letter or somewhere else.
If you are looking for the letter Blitzen then look diagonal down to look for it.
If you are looking for the word donner look if it is going diagonal up or diagonal down.
If you want to look for prancer you have to look left or right.
If you want look for reindeer then look diagonal up or left or diagonal down.
If you want to look for Rudolph then look diagonal down or right or diagonal up.
If you want to look for vixen then look up or down or left or right or diagonal up or diagonal down.
Friday, 7 December 2018
How to get ready for Christmas eve
This week we have been learning about a Procedure and a Procedure is telling someone what to do.
1: check if your Christmas tree is up properly
2: check if you put on some Christmas Decoration and some candy canes on.
3: when you Poured the milk in the cup you need to check if it is expired.
4: when you make cookies don’t make it smoke & burn Santa will hate it.
5: you need to Prepare you and your family's Feast.
6: you need to put a big star on top of the Christmas tree.
7: don’t over cook the ham in the oven Santa won’t like it.
8: You need to put some carrot out for the reindeer's.
9: you need to check if you are ready for Christmas eve.
10: check if you put some Christmas lights on the tree.
11: make sure if you put some present under the tree.
12: open your present that has been given to you.
1: check if your Christmas tree is up properly
2: check if you put on some Christmas Decoration and some candy canes on.
3: when you Poured the milk in the cup you need to check if it is expired.
4: when you make cookies don’t make it smoke & burn Santa will hate it.
5: you need to Prepare you and your family's Feast.
6: you need to put a big star on top of the Christmas tree.
7: don’t over cook the ham in the oven Santa won’t like it.
8: You need to put some carrot out for the reindeer's.
9: you need to check if you are ready for Christmas eve.
10: check if you put some Christmas lights on the tree.
11: make sure if you put some present under the tree.
12: open your present that has been given to you.
Thursday, 6 December 2018
Giving food to reindeer's.
Giving food to reindeer's.
This week we have been learning about a persuasion.
it is when you change other peoples mind.
This week we have been learning about a persuasion.
it is when you change other peoples mind.
Reindeer's need food because they always run out of energy.
We Should give carrots to the reindeer's because they work so much that they don’t get to eat. Santa only feeds the reindeer's when they a finish.
We need to feed reindeer's more and more so they can have Enough energy to go and drop of the Present then they can go back home and eat more food. The reindeer's can have lots of food when the come back from the dropping of the present.
When Santa goes on his sled he Should put some carrots in it so when the reindeer's are tired he can give some carrots to the reindeer's.
Thursday, 29 November 2018
The Christmas Eve
We are writing about Christmas because we are going to celebrate Christmas
On Christmas eve Santa comes to drop of the present for us and when Santa comes down the chimney he looks for some carrots but there was no carrot and Santa ate the cookie for himself.
when he went outside the Deers was happy for a moment then he bring no carrot and he said sorry.
So he said char then the Deers went to stop at the other house then the Deers where looking at the window and Santa said no carrots then Santa
drank his tea then the Deers breath on to the window.
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Then him and his Reindeer went to a hotel Santa went in and to drop peoples present then he look down then he saw MacDonald then he went to go and get so carrots from mac Donald so he got it then he came up from the chimney with a lot of carrot and he said to the Deers Merry Christmas then he said hohohoho then he gave them a hand full of carrot to each one of them. Merry Christmas.
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